This was brilliant!

A very well done story.

Please write more!

Loved it. I always wondered what the others thought about at that moment.

I've always wondered how that must feel, or I tried to think of my happiest memory when I watch PoA. It's really hard. I have never figured which is my saddest and happiest memory...

You did a wonderful job

I'm trying to think of something good to write for the challenge. But imagination hasn't come around to say hi yet.

Bye!

Thank you so, so much for participating!

I am so happy to have such a good writer contributing to our community. I personally came up with this challenge, and you easily exceeded my expectations! Hermione's POV was particularly interesting, and her worst moment gave me chills. I like how you incorporated what happened in the book, and used it here. Also, I like Ron being sweet.

Fantastic! Happy to have you on board!

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Casakitten

I really enjoyed seeing Hermione's analytical side of this. It's very interesting to see another person's pov on this moment. Her worst moment ever is pretty scary to.

Good job.

And thanks for entering!