"Legolas, Elladan, Elrohir are five, Arwen is two"

Tolkien didn't give us information about Legolas's age, so you can make him the Twins' age if you want. However, in Appendix B's Timeline, we're told the Twins were born in Third Age 130. And -- now this is the problem part -- we're also told Arwen was born 1 years later, in TA 241.

So while this is *cute*, you've lost me as a reader, because my brain keeps telling me it's IMPOSSIBLE. And IMPOSSIBLE outweighs *cute* every time.

Sorry. Have a nice *cute* story.

This is such fun. Love the developing relationship, particularly this chapter.

Such a cute set of stories highlighting the relationship between Legolas and Arwen. Will be interesting to see how it grows and changes as they grow older.

Peace
Beverly

Aww! This really made me smile.
Please write more!! :)

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Aw! That is so sweet of little Arwen. And very comforting for someone who has lost a loved one.

I love this little peek into a friendship between Legolas and Arwen. It's so tender and sensitive. Keep up the good work.

This chapter was sad! How young she is and her innocence are shown very well. And when she said that Legolas could share her mother, it was touching. Great chapter!

this was lovely.
please update soon

Again this was very cute :P I like the relationships between Legolas and Arwen and, well, all of them...great chapter :)

Aw this is so sweet! They are both very cute a little kids :)
Maybe you could make the chapters a bit longer? Although where you end them feels right, longer chapters would be nice! Great story :)

That is sweet. Thanks!

cute!