Nice. The friendship between Marth and Navarre warmed my heart :D

Seemed cool, but I'm frustrated I did not undertand the end.

Nice. You nailed everyone's personalities! My only problem is that it's so short. I want more. XD And the more Marth fics, the better. ^-^ (I'll alert, just in case... ;) )

Ooh! New Shadow Dragon fic. And... I liked it! The Ogma/Navarre dynamic felt comfortable without being trite, and the way Marth *wasn't* comfortable around them (particularly around Navarre) was entirely believable. Navarre's...er, "qualification" for being a swordsman was a vivid touch, and overall it was nice to see Navarre being shown as capable of more than grunting and killing people. As for Marth, I found your take on him spot-on, especially his exchange with Navarre at the end. Anyway, this is something I'd like to see more of.