 Amanda 2009-10-12 . chapter 1 Amazing!! I love this story so much. It was so passionate, tearful, and moving! I especially love the ending, and how the readers come to know of what his name is, like how you wrote it...and the very last sentence. It's so cute :D |
 wifey 2009-10-09 . chapter 1 AWESOME (to be continued)
...long-** comment coming up
TESTING |
 KairiLuver 2009-10-03 . chapter 1I haven't reviewed in years, but this is so good and long that it deserves more than just being reviewed.!
I just loved this. Especially how you didn't make Sora a bad guy. :D
'cause alot of authors have to make someone be the "bad" guy to make the story good.
And i can only say that I HAVE to read all of your stuff now:D |
 Mauve Rune 2009-09-01 . chapter 1Hehe, that's really cute & well-written. :]
I'll definently be checking your other works anytime soon; I happen to like this pairing. |
 Kh_sanctuary18 2009-08-15 . chapter 1 This is such a cute story. I loved it. Keep up the good work! |
 Maika Akarui 2009-08-02 . chapter 1Wow! Amazing! This is such a touching story. I loved it so much I couldn't stop reading it! Thanks for making such a great Roxiri fic. I love the pairing so much as well!
Keep on doing great fics okay? :D |
 Guest 2009-08-01 . chapter 1 A great story.
Definitely worth your effort and the time I spent reading it.
Keep up the good work :] |
 The Accident-Prone Klutz 2009-07-19 . chapter 1Oh my gosh!! This was absolutely amazing! Everything was perfect
I loved how they didn't know Roxas's name until the end!!
Gosh I envy your writing! It was beautifully written and descriptive! Gosh some parts I really felt like I was there..it was weird..
yeah having Roxas in my arms *sigh* xD
lol anyway I loved ur story it was AWESOME!! seriously awesome..awesomely awesome...yeah ok..lol |
 Murdering Spree 2009-06-29 . chapter 1 I'm too lazy to sign on to my accnt. Anyway, a friend told me to read this. She will kill me if she finds out i'm just reading this now.
Anyway let me get this off my chest - OMG!!OMG!!OMG!!OMG!!OMG!!OMG!!OMG!!OMG!!OMG!!OMG!!OMG!!
I love the story! You definitely poured your heart and soul into this. I felt soo sad for Sora but at the same time happy that Kairi met Roxas. Roxas sounds very hot to me. You did amazing describing the situations and everything! I felt the love! SPECTACULAR! |
 Talk Like A Zombie 2009-06-22 . chapter 1Wow this was so romantic and happy and sad all at once! I loved the sweet parts and went all "aw!" at the sad parts. While reading this, and know the actual you (as a real person) and some of the things you yourself have gone through, I saw a lot of you in this fic. I can really tell how you poured your heart out into this fic those days that spent writing it. I think anybody reading this feels a little nostalgic of their own experiences, I know I did. Like you know I'm not in KH or FF (btw I loved how you combined them ;D) so I don't know much about the characters or situations but it really did feel like I was reading a story, A FREAKIN BOOK MARIA!! This was really interesting and I STILL don't know how you can come up with a lot of the clever and creative words in your writing xD it took me awhile to get through this fic but I really enjoyed it! Not to mention I would kill to rescue some hot blondie that washed up on and beach and stays at my house ;D*wink* |
 Hi 2009-06-22 . chapter 1 So Grace told me to read this. Actually, she went to my house and told me to read it in freaking 7:30 in the morning. I told her to get the hell away b/c this story was so long. But when I started reading I could not stop. Its amazing, nice, wonderful, heartwarming, beautiful. VERY beautiful. You depicted the characters really well especially Roxas even though it was AU. I like the story too, very touching. |
 AWWW 2009-06-22 . chapter 1 AW! I cried reading this! Grace is such a sweetheart for recommending this to me! Goob job! |
 Black-and-Blue 2009-06-22 . chapter 1 That is how I would turn out if I did not read this. Um, she woke me up at 9 to read this. I was at work! Jesus Christ!
But anyway I really like this story. I do not have a FanFiction account and so I can only respond as some guy named "Black and Blue"
Well, I guess I will elaborate because you deserve it.
The story is very nice. It is filled with a lot of emotion and I cried. I'm a girl so that's ok. I understand everything Kairi went through and the same thing Roxas went through too. I really love this story. Nice job! |
 Copy and paste 2009-06-21 . chapter 1 Me: So why do I have to read this.
The Annoying Girl from Hell: She's a great writer. Trust me.
Me: It's long.
The Annoying Girl from Hell: You'll survive. Plus, if you don't read this, I will personally run over to your house and chop your balls off with a butter knife. Understood?
Me: Ok. I'll read.
The Annoying Girl from Hell: Better.
Me: Loved the story. I cried, ALOT. Need I say more. I suppose the "Annoying Girl from Hell" will laugh at me for it. She can go suck on her thumb! |
 SHHHH 2009-06-21 . chapter 1 Your writing technique is amazing! It flows, it makes sense, there was so much emotion. I felt it ALL.
It's better than Grace's writing, but don't tell her that. She deserves to be yelled at for yelling at me. She YELLED at me to read.
And well, I am glad I did. |