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YukiAka
2010-01-05 . chapter 5
Lovin' it! Good to have a fanfic were Cloud goes back and have contact/friendship with Reno. New chapter soon I hope
bluefynx
2010-01-05 . chapter 5
You are absolutely amazing. I love this story. ^-^
Kanaria Kasane
2010-01-04 . chapter 5
You. I love you.

This story is sheer brilliance! It's so wonderfully written, epic, has a plot of its own, and it's definitely my favourite! Since FFnet locked me out of my own account... (aka, I can't even sign in even though my password is correct and the whole thing is messed up in its own way...) I have decided to add you to my FEEDs list. I'll stalk this fic forever!

<3 Please, do update soon. It's 2010 and we, your fans, love you. XDD
Middle Ground
2010-01-04 . chapter 5
I have to say, this is the best story I've ever read. You're totally AWESOME! The expressions you use, the style you have, everything is amazing and so natural!
Hope you update soon, I can't wait until the next chapter!
Owl344
2010-01-01 . chapter 5
I really, really love this story. It's quite good--though I think I'm slightly jealous of your ability to pack more words in a chapter than my longest story. But I say, 'hah!' to any jealousy, because I'd really rather just read the story.
Toki Mirage
2010-01-01 . chapter 5
*-* I think I'm in love. *heart throbs* I'm so upset you haven't updated in so long! This fic is amazing! Mind-blowingly amazingly awesome! I love how you've integrated Cloud into the group, how Zack and Seph are interested in him, and ESPECIALLY how Cloud and Reno are f*ck buddies. XD Mwahahahaha

Looking forward to more! Please don't let this story wither and die? *pulls out the mega Cloud-o-fied puppy dog eyes*

Mirage
LeolaTaylor
2009-12-31 . chapter 5
Okay, I've just read through the entire story and I gotta say, what this story lacks in elegance and finesse it makes up for in interesting exchanges and ** hot scenes. Wishful thinking though it may be, I'd love to see this updated.
The Masked Triangle
2009-12-30 . chapter 5
I would proclaim my dying love for you, but it's getting kind of old on the internet. Instead I'll just say you blew my socks off. I spent the better part of twelve hours reading this because I couldn't pull myself away. you're a genius. Hope you update soon.
Cabochon
2009-12-11 . chapter 5
Wow, long chapters...I like it! Humour, gradual building up to an interesting Cloud and Sephiroth relationship, the OCs, excellent characters, and ultimate Time-Travel-Plotline-of-AWESOMENESS! When you describe Cloudy's training, you make me wince in sympathy.

Great job, keep it up!
KasumiDestruction
2009-11-23 . chapter 5
The Zack/Aeris thing, about their lack-of-meeting made me shrivel up and whimper ;_;
Lucifer's Advocate7
2009-11-19 . chapter 5
I adore your story! The long chapters are a joy to read, even of they keep me away from physics homework. When I first started reading your stories, I was afraid that Cloud was going to lie low and not do his best. Thank you for not doing that, like some others! I love how this Cloud kicks a**. I think that's why I enjoy the time-travel stories so much, or AU ones at least. I love reading when someone works hard and really deserves their position - or at least has the talent for it. This is so much better than those "Oh! Cloud and Sephiroth! Let me make Cloud all weak and fall into Sephiroth's arms!" or "Cloud kicks a**, but when he sees Sephiroth, he can't fight and his love for the General makes him into a cute, weak-willed puppy!"

Not that those stories are too common, but I happen upon them enough to abhor them with a vengeance. And I like your OCs - they make this story so much more. While I still would like to see a little more individualization and characterization of them, they are coming all pretty decently.

I look forward to the next part of the story! Especially when Cloud and Zack finally start talking...
UchihaHinata2210
2009-11-17 . chapter 5
absolutely loved it write more please.
BlackPhoenix
2009-11-17 . chapter 5
Cruel, so cruel must update must update please.
spoonring
2009-11-09 . chapter 5
cant wait for more. update quickly.
spoonring
2009-11-09 . chapter 4
love it. amazing.
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