:) I liked it.

A great story. Very good.

wow.. this was great i totally tink this was wat was goin through his head at that time u should do Spock's POV that would be awesome

Loved the style of this.

Best...movie...ever, well, besides Transformers, anyways not the point! I liked it, very Jim Kirk-y (if that makes sense?)I liked how you weaved the scene with his thoughts, as well as with his reactions to each of the others. Yeah, about all I have to say, you have written in forever (again, hypocrite=me, my page is still blank due to my laziness to put up the fanfics I wrote, eh, a year ago?)
Oh, and I liked the ending, Well, shit...nice :)

You captured Kirk's uncertainty very well. I wondered how Sulu knew Kirk was first officer, then remembered on second viewing, he was there! Nicely done!

I love how you captured Jim in this fic! It was an incredibly stressful situation, and you conveyed his tumultuous feelings very well. Thank you for posting this.

i loved this, poor jim that would be kinda hard to hear with bones, i love buddyship with sulu also

Oh this is wonderful! I love how you portray his feelings, because, in that scene, he does look like an asshole, and it is cool to see how he feels about what he just did. Excellent work.
-Nyx

Good! Would you care to continue?