Love this story, just added it to my favs and alerts.

By the way I like your style of writing.

Chapter 5: The bold and italic fonts make it hard to read when it is the whole chapter, and not merely a few words within the chapter. If it's supposed to be a past event, then you should keep it as just italics, or just bold. Not both of them at once (preferably the italics, as not only is it easier on the eyes, but it is the traditional method for indicating flashbacks and past events).

Chapter 6: You should get rid of the underlining - it's confusing to read.

hey it's a great story keep it up

wonderful chapter great work

awesome story!