That was really beautiful. I think it would be interesting if you extended this piece. It's wonderful and very poetic the way it is. I've just always wondered what Rochester would have thought at the very beginning of his blindness, how he would have coped and adjusted physically and mentally. I think you'd be great at exploring that. :)
Awesome job!

wow. I read Wide Saragossa Sea, and you captured it perfectly, as well as Jane Eyre. Ah, brilliantly done.

"I would give my eyes never to have to see this abominable place."

That was also brilliant...I can't quite remember if it's an actual quote, but it fits so well. Great job!