*GASP* HOW DARE YOU MAKE TSUKASA ILL! If the cold made Futaba and Hitoha that way, who knows what'll it do to Tsukasa...

this is preaty good i would so totaly go and bye this if i could( and ya in a way the same thing has happined to me whell except the hole mad science expariment)so keep on wrighting it

Seems like a good story so far but spelling and grammer is terrible...