Uh, why is everyone an Admiral? Because that's they're rank in your computer game? Granted, Freddy on a Rebel space station is silly as it is, but a bunch of Admirals wouldn't be stationed on a station; *maybe* a commander would be in charge, not an Admiral. You might want to consider changing their ranks for the purpose of the story. Just a suggestion.

OOOh! Good story!... Is it just me or am I way too hyper late at night...

Katanas!

*ahem* As you can tell, I like katanas. Anywho, looks like another good story! Onward to chapters unknown! *clicks link to next chapter*