That was good. Keep writing

Apart from getting a couple facts wrong about their first (and only) encounter-in Canon there was no threatening Bludger, but there were Slytherin dressed as Dementors; plus, Cho and Cedric apparently had no history before the Yule Ball, although JKR is never clear about that one way or the other-the main thing is, this is Harry/Cho the way it's supposed to be: simple and sweet, and everything Harry/Ginny was not.

A fic well written. Cheers.

I'm glad someone has provided a not-so-teary yet in-character study of Cho. Even if I don't particularly like her, it's nice to see someone add dimension to her.

Not canon, one bit...you had Cho on the wrong broom for crying out loud...still it was a nice, no brilliant piece!

well written. there are a few mistakes though. some of the things you put in didn't happen. cho's broom isn't a nimbus 20 but a comet 260. the fake dementors didn't make their appearance either. still a good story but i think it would be better if it was truer to the book. oh well. :)

Well written fic. i've read Silverlight's fics too! One of the best E/T fanfic writers I know! Like yourself!

Jae-Young, dare I presume that you've converted into a Cho fan? Anyway, I do love this work-it's an excellent on Cho's character. (And I like the way you "explain" that "Cho" is really a nickname-short for "Charlotte.")

a cool fan fiction. your got feal of the game

I love you. And the Harry/Firebolt needs more innuendos. And smut. XD I could always add chocolate flavoured varnish. Or something...silverlight