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Hermowninny
2009-11-28 . chapter 10
I usually don't read AU, but I liked your writing so I decided to read this and I love it!
Can't wait for the next update.
And poor Harry. He's in a bit of an akward situation, isn't he? But I like seeing the trio friendship in there, too.
heronlove
2009-11-20 . chapter 10
This is the kind of story i like.You show Ron as more than just a stupid hothead. He is loving and protective, and sweet. What are his parents hiding? They keep watching them for a reason,and i just don't think it is just about the sex. I hoope you finish this story.
napchic
2009-11-12 . chapter 10
Oh, Blue. For this morning after scene, i nearly forgive you denying me the actual event. I almost passed out at this line: "Each tiny movement he made against her caused his skin to pull away from hers in a delightful way, like it was reluctant to let hers go at all" and proceeded to send it in squeemail to another fan of your Ron. Lord, i love him adjusting a sagging blanket with blushing, muttering morning!Hermione and your perfectly wonderful Harry.

Every time you write you make me want to draw.
gosh so sweet
2009-11-11 . chapter 10
AND I LOVED IT AS USUAL.
My god when I saw the email saying this was updated,
I literally almost died.
I was like MY FAVORITE. STORY EVER. IS UPDATED.
HALLELUJAH. :)
Love this. Love you.
Magnificent. Always in character.
ALWAYS THE BEST.
tatiana113
2009-11-11 . chapter 10
You just made me love Ron even more!
ObsessedRHShipper
2009-11-11 . chapter 10
Cute chapter.
IntheWheelofTime
2009-11-08 . chapter 8
Are you gonna review anytime soon? I'm dying to get to the next chapter. :)
ErinFabu
2009-10-11 . chapter 9
Oh my goodness, I don't know how I missed this story before now, but it's just SO wonderful. Can't wait for more.
catlady45
2009-10-10 . chapter 9
Here via Checkmated rec. Ok, chapter 9 was one of the hottest things ever. I think the ending was perfect. And the "first time" was quite possibly one of my favs ever because it's so...backwards and strange. And poor Harry, the test dummy! And I'm excited to see the reactions of the parents. All the little character bits in here are great, and the Ron thought is great. At first I was going to write "the first part of this story seemed really rushed" as a criticism, but then I realized that's the point so good job conveying the feel with the writing :).
shocfix
2009-10-08 . chapter 9
I came here via napchic's art and I had already gone to bed and was just gonna have a last check on my iphone and I clicked on the fic and was up until 3am reading... and you have MORE FIC!

seriously - this was a definitively protective Ron...

*eats him with a spoon*
cara.seismic
2009-09-26 . chapter 9
oh my godnes. this story is PERFECT! Love it! you're a great writer. update son! :)
cara.seismic
2009-09-25 . chapter 3
aw such a cute chapter! i love this story. it's such a great idea and plot. :) can't wait to keep reading!
napchic
2009-09-25 . chapter 9
*is dead*

i had to read this twice over a period of 24 hours to calm myself enough for a proper review. Are you kidding with how awesome this is? *stammers* I just... ack. Guh... so good. so good.

you have reduced me to inarticulate goo. Best firstie scene maybe ever. Well technically secondie scene. Certainly the best second time in the history of R/Hr fandom. I could frame it. It's perfect.

I suspect you are going to "fade to black" with this scene and move on, and i can respect that, but oh if it continued i might just cry for joy.

regardless, thank you so much for continuing this story. it really is inventive and lovely, and just a joy to read.
elly755
2009-09-23 . chapter 9
yeah! quick updateing!
ObsessedRHShipper
2009-09-23 . chapter 9
I love how you captured their desire, insecurities, and how they feel unsure still about how the other feels. Great scene.
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