>So, big question, do we continue this tale in its current >version? or end it here and start a new one?

You cannot possibly be so cruel as to end this! Please don't end this. I really really like it. I ... hell, I really like it. I'm at a loss for words. This was phenomenal.

More please. Please.

I really enjoy this and your other "Life" work. I look forward to seeing more and for this particular story would like to see it contined rather than followed in a sequel

I say keep this fic going! Also, I just decided to check Life for a interesting story or two, and ended up reading your fantastic story. Great job, keep goin'

Oh I would love you so much to go on with this story when you are back! I enjoyed every line of it so far and had already to reread it as it is really beautiful!

Hope you enjoy your holidays and when you come back we'll get to hear a little more about our two heros :-)

By the way, I think it's a really amazing approach to make charlie's father one of the dirty six!

Another sweet ending. Oh how I love it :D Dani was perfect in this chapter. The whole running and escaping thing is too true. Wonderful job!

I hope you enjoy your time in Africa! Your trip sounds amazingly fun. Be safe and have a great time alright? =)

Lastly, I think you should continue the story here. Since it has a lot of reviews, newer readers would be more attracted to it. Here's my theory:

Lots of reviews
+
Lots of chapters
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New readers
+
?
=
Profit!



Makes sense right? :D

How bittersweet... The chapter was good! Your ability to portray Charlie and Dani are fantastic. I feel like I'm actually watching the show. Keep up the great work!

Oh, awesome chapter! The Charlie and Dani moments were cute :D But what nailed it was the end. Nicely done!

Whoa amazing loved the orange underwear cool. That she didn't need the drink more then him was amazing so touching. Good luck in africa becareful. Hope you enjoy.

Am for starting a new one where they figure out who is behind this and search for her dad. But that is my humble opinion.
maria

This was a great chapter! The ending was funny, the orange underwear, I liked it!
I really liked the ending of the chapter though. It was really powerful that Dani would choose love over anything else. I loved the line "Charlie anchored her, but he also freed her. " that was great!
I think that whether this should be stay as one story or become two is up to you. It does not matter to me.
I hope you have a great time in Africa, it sounds like the safari should be a lot of fun!

That was a really good chapter. It was so emotional!
I loved the part
"“I need to know if I felt this then too. I think I went to Tidwell, because I couldn’t handle the feelings I was having for you and I needed somewhere else to be, someone else to be with” she said with shocking honesty. Dani Reese never ceased to amaze him, she had a depth that he had not begun to explore or appreciate and Charlie knew he wanted to spend the rest of his life exploring all the wonderful hidden secrets of her nature."
That was a really good look at Reese and her feelings . You are doing a really good job capturing both the characters and their emotions.

Please continue. Love your stories.

Well I for one say go for it. If you can figure out the who, why and wherefor of the conspiracy then take it and run. I'm loving the interaction between these two. A prickly pair if ever there was one. And on a personal note, I think reading this may just have given me the jolt to get back to writing. I may not have seen the last four yet, so I'll have to pace it.

Have a great holiday, get lots of ideas down and come back full of stories to tell.

Sylvia aka Jo Taylor

Loving this. Those two are always so complicated.

Also, enjoy Africa! I was there in June, and I just kept thinking about how much Charlie Crews and his zen would love a safari.

Love where you're going with the conspiracy story. And their relationship is so 'them'. I'm loving it.

Sylvia

Didn't he figure out it was his father in one of the first chapters ? Did he block it out ?