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aerisbolt 7/24/09 . chapter 1
Well this was a fun idea for a story and I liked that you kept it lighthearted. The only thing I question is the lack of reaction by Tifa at seeing Aerith, unless she looked like someone else, because they seemed to react to the differences with everyone else and seeing I just figured it would be the same for Tifa seeing her dead friend alive again...even if she was very different in this other reality.

I loved how you had Tifa ask Yuffie to never change, she seems to be always shown as being a brat or that her friends only tolerate her, so it was nice to see her have a nice moment being appreciated. Keep up the good work my friend!
ToWriteLoveOnHerArms08 6/22/09 . chapter 1
I saved the best for last, I LOVED THIS SO MUCH! It was perfect, exactly how I hoped it would be! I love the different character's personalities and how it ended. A female hojo...I shudder. haha. And as for Yuffie..."Whoops" was an understatement LOL, but AMAZING story, thanks for writing this for me! Your request is coming soon!
always-kh 6/22/09 . chapter 1
i liked the part with yuffie just saying "oops"

very interesting alternate reality ruda was really good as was cloud and aerith a turk? a very ironic twist.
Speedy Speck 6/19/09 . chapter 1
Ha! Loved Sephiroth's line about teaching her to break necks...it shouldn't be funny but it is XD Also really enjoyed Ruda and the new version of Yuffie :D Another great story! Keep up the fantastic work!
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