 aerisbolt 7/24/09 . chapter 1Well this was a fun idea for a story and I liked that you kept it lighthearted. The only thing I question is the lack of reaction by Tifa at seeing Aerith, unless she looked like someone else, because they seemed to react to the differences with everyone else and seeing I just figured it would be the same for Tifa seeing her dead friend alive again...even if she was very different in this other reality.
I loved how you had Tifa ask Yuffie to never change, she seems to be always shown as being a brat or that her friends only tolerate her, so it was nice to see her have a nice moment being appreciated. Keep up the good work my friend! |
 ToWriteLoveOnHerArms08 6/22/09 . chapter 1I saved the best for last, I LOVED THIS SO MUCH! It was perfect, exactly how I hoped it would be! I love the different character's personalities and how it ended. A female hojo...I shudder. haha. And as for Yuffie..."Whoops" was an understatement LOL, but AMAZING story, thanks for writing this for me! Your request is coming soon! |