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| The Light's Refrain 2007-05-21 ch 1,  | abusePoor Vaporeon T_T. No one wants the impefect, even though she (he?) really has nothing wrong with them, They just weren't meant to battle. The Vaporeon could've been an excellent Contest Pokemon (though this fic might've been written before Contests) but most people were only interested in her battleing ability. Such a shame The only thing I don't really like is the part early on where the Eevee was traded away for a Geodude. I don't buy that. Even if the Eevee was weak, the trainer could've easily used it to bag herself a rare Pokemon, since Eevee are rare. Even if it was some semirare Pokemon like a Doduo, it would've been fine. But a Geodude? An excellent oneshot overall though. I enjoyed it ^_^ Cya! |
| PhantomPhanGirl 2006-08-07 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was pretty cute and sad. This was only the second Pokemon fic I've ever read ^^ But it was cute. I liked it =) I also felt really bad for the Vaporeon. I guess I never used mine very much either... But that doesn't make it useless... =( Hehe, well next time I play pokemon, I'll have to get a Vaporeon and it'll become one of my main pokemon in honor of this story ^^ |
| i an't tallen 2006-04-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseI Love it! |
| Canyx 2006-02-26 ch 1, | abuseWOW! AWESOME! Can a vapooreon really do that?! That idea is...so creative! KUDOS! |
| Twisted Alyx 2005-06-27 ch 1, | abuseVery beautifully written. I liked that the Vaporeon wanted to be forgotten rather than become a blazing star, beat the League and all that jazz... Kind of a depressed Pokemon, huh? It didn't really seem to mind all the sadness/ regrets around it though, did it? -TA |
| Away Now 2005-06-18 ch 1, | abuseGah! I can't stand the sadness! *cries* |
| LilyPichu 2005-02-26 ch 1, | abuseOh, so finally I've found the source for this fic! (and the author) Anyway- I loved it. It inspired me to pieces. Literally. It was very touching...ooh I just loved it. ;_; Sorry for the late, late, late review, but I can't help reading it over and over again. Vaporeon is one of my favorite pokemon, and this one has to be my favorite one. ^^ Good job! ;; |
| PlasmaBomb 2004-10-04 ch 1, | abuseWow. (That's the only thing that's on my mind now, so that's all you're going to get) |
| Ellen is my middle name 2003-09-20 ch 1, | abuseSad. It makes me want to cry. |
| liberifatali8 2003-04-26 ch 1, | abuseThat's so sad... ;_; But it's really well written, maybe too many line breaks, but it's nice! |
| Raichu 2003-04-21 ch 1, | abuseThis is one of the best stories I have ever read. I've now seen it on five places on the web (including my own site;-) and it has never failed to bring tears to my eyes. It's interesting reading the range of opinions. I add my weight to Priestess and Addams... I wonder what it is in your life that has enabled you to write something so moving. And what is it in mine that responds like it does? |
| Blazer 2003-03-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseSad. But I must say this. At the end. that was the most unique form of suicide I'll probably ever hear. |
| I hate Potter yes I do 2002-12-12 ch 1, | abuse*quirks an eyebrow* Morrie, I know you too well, and this sounds like it's YOU, not the eevee O___o;;; |
| Cadmuse 2002-12-08 ch 1, | abuseDarling, it's waaaay too self-conscious. Needs work, but personally, I wouldn't bother. Three words: Get over it. |
| Carter Tachikawa 2002-11-22 ch 1, | abuseAh, the depressing I'm listening to is perfect for this story. Vaporeon is my favorite of all of Eevee's evolutions. Beautiful story. Keep writing.~CT |