One of the most beautiful stories I've ever read. :)

I remembering reading this fic a few years ago, back when I still had no account at FFnet. I recall being haunted by Vaporeon's dismal and suicidal train of thought. I still am, come to think of it.

Being passed from one trainer to another is really traumatizing for a pokemon, and I can only imagine what it feels like. With this story, though, you made me feel that pain quite acutely. Then there was that thing with Team Rocket. Afterwards, there was the realization of having no home to return to.

My heart ached for this Vaporeon. Fics where the character meets with a tragic end, and this mostly not being their fault, never fail to resound in my mind.

Beautiful.

~Ryan L

Poor Vaporeon T_T. No one wants the impefect, even though she (he?) really has nothing wrong with them, They just weren't meant to battle. The Vaporeon could've been an excellent Contest Pokemon (though this fic might've been written before Contests) but most people were only interested in her battleing ability. Such a shame

The only thing I don't really like is the part early on where the Eevee was traded away for a Geodude. I don't buy that. Even if the Eevee was weak, the trainer could've easily used it to bag herself a rare Pokemon, since Eevee are rare. Even if it was some semirare Pokemon like a Doduo, it would've been fine. But a Geodude?

An excellent oneshot overall though. I enjoyed it ^_^

Cya!

Wow, that was pretty cute and sad. This was only the second Pokemon fic I've ever read ^^ But it was cute. I liked it =) I also felt really bad for the Vaporeon. I guess I never used mine very much either... But that doesn't make it useless... =( Hehe, well next time I play pokemon, I'll have to get a Vaporeon and it'll become one of my main pokemon in honor of this story ^^

I Love it!

WOW! AWESOME! Can a vapooreon really do that?! That idea is...so creative! KUDOS!

Very beautifully written. I liked that the Vaporeon wanted to be forgotten rather than become a blazing star, beat the League and all that jazz... Kind of a depressed Pokemon, huh? It didn't really seem to mind all the sadness/ regrets around it though, did it?

-TA

Gah! I can't stand the sadness! *cries*

Oh, so finally I've found the source for this fic! (and the author) Anyway- I loved it. It inspired me to pieces. Literally. It was very touching...ooh I just loved it. ;_; Sorry for the late, late, late review, but I can't help reading it over and over again. Vaporeon is one of my favorite pokemon, and this one has to be my favorite one. ^^ Good job! ;;

Wow.

(That's the only thing that's on my mind now, so that's all you're going to get)

Sad. It makes me want to cry.

That's so sad... ;_;
But it's really well written, maybe too many line breaks, but it's nice!

This is one of the best stories I have ever read. I've now seen it on five places on the web (including my own site;-) and it has never failed to bring tears to my eyes.

It's interesting reading the range of opinions. I add my weight to Priestess and Addams... I wonder what it is in your life that has enabled you to write something so moving. And what is it in mine that responds like it does?

Sad. But I must say this. At the end. that was the most unique form of suicide I'll probably ever hear.

*quirks an eyebrow* Morrie, I know you too well, and this sounds like it's YOU, not the eevee O___o;;;