i read your profile, and i wanted you to know that you're not alone on this website! i too care about grammar, but i'm not going to rant to someone in a REVIEW over it. if they don't use proper grammar, it's on them. all i care about is that they put out decent fanfictions.

pretty good. the first chapter was funny tho xD update! more chapters please :]

Heh her stabbing him would have made A LOT more sense but it's a movie made for little kids and this way was A LOT less bloody.

Haha. Breaking the fourth wall.

So yeah. When Mulan was released in theaters I was eight years old, and even back then the horse and two people in full armor being lifted by a single rope (hell, not even a rope, more like a string!) made no sense to me.

YES! Thank you! Why in the world would she use a sharp, pointy weapon to pin him to the roof instead of just impaling him with it?

...oh yeah, because Disney would never allow such a "graphic" death in a family-friendly film. Ridiculous.

Seriously, though, your ending makes A LOT more sense.