|Reviews for Megumi Tennoji Was No Fool|
| bluedoves 2/18/11 . chapter 1
love this couiple!
| MyDirtyLittleSecret 12/20/09 . chapter 1
LOL! I always wanted to do something with Minami, but I can never think of any good ideas. You definitely did. It was good. :D
| b.aka-chan xD 9/13/09 . chapter 1
good night is 'Gute Nacht' in German, not 'gute nocht' xD
| TheaBlackthorn 7/22/09 . chapter 1
This pairing is so cute I've never read it before but ti's great :)
| moonlesslife 7/3/09 . chapter 1
| NewPaladin 6/25/09 . chapter 1
Masao and Minami? An odd pair, I would say. But there is potential...
Well, it was a great idea to use german words, but please allow me to make some corrections.
First, you did pretty well. But there are some things that a foreigner cant quite understand.
"Nochen" is not a word. The right term is "Gute Nacht". "Kind" is correct. "No" is spelled wrong. Its "Nein". "Nie" is correct. (Even though I would use "Nein" in this context as well).
"My love" is a bit tricky, because in english you can use it for both genders. But in german there is difference between female and male form. In this case its "Mein Liebster". "Ja" is correct. "Narrentum" is... well, its difficult. If you live in the middle ages you could say it. But besides that its not a modern word, it means something like foolishness or stupidity. So you cant use it as an insult. A better alternative is "Blödmann" or "Dummkopf". You could have used "Idiot" as well. Its the same in german.
Well, besides this little correction, it was an overall good fic. Keep going.
| village girl no. 3 6/21/09 . chapter 1
my goodness fucking gracious!
i'm so glad you wrote another one!
it makes me want to type up the stories i have sitting around or atleast go and reread the manga and your other story. 3
absitively posolutely the cutest fic i've ever read.
i suggest reading this while listenting to "baby got back" by sir mixalot and "are you gonna be my girl" by jet
i did and it made it 3x funnier...
can't wait for the next!
and yes..i think i will go reread the manga