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kapap
2010-01-05 . chapter 6
Edward is fantastic! jasper is wonderful! I can't wait to see Bellas problems about the past...
I simply love your characters:)
AvaAnne
2010-01-05 . chapter 6
I really like your fic. I like how the characters interact. I can't wait for the next chapter.
twilightfanforeveredward
2010-01-04 . chapter 6
love this story update soon
Ginny less-than-three Jasper
2010-01-03 . chapter 6
ok, so i have no clue why, but that last line, just LOVED it!
it's one of those, that as soon as i read it, it just put a smile on my face =]
drummergirl6
2010-01-03 . chapter 6
I loved this chapter. I was glad to see it from Bella's perspective because I was kind of unimpressed with her reaction towards Edward as if it was all his fault.

I'm not going to lie, for some reason I kept thinking that her and Jasper were going to kiss or get too close or something just as Edward walked in. I think it was because of when they high fived and Edward kind of eyed it. I did love the bonding though. Probably just my over-reactive imagination. I want some Alice/Jasper action now though!

Anyways, great job this on this chapter and I liked how you ended it with Edward sleeping beside her, it made me happy. =D

I'm just going to pick one favourite Musician because I have too many other favourites to choose from: John Mayer. I'm listening to his "Where the Light Is" DVD/Album as I type this.
LiddyAnne
2010-01-01 . chapter 4
I heart Jasper the fabulous dirty hippie! And I love this Edward. I can't wait to see if he has more problems, or if he is just naturally this adorably childlike.
bellacullen08
2010-01-01 . chapter 6
i love it! i love you! please update faster =D
dellatwi
2009-12-29 . chapter 5
okay so my bad stupid question some how I missed this chap and reas through to the next. Damn jake is a lil bit of assclown. thanks for sharing this egoward is one of my faves and I have a lil crush on stonerjazz my hubby was a stoner when we met still is you know only on weekends now cuz we are sorta grown up lol
thamker
2009-12-28 . chapter 6
I love this chapter. I love the Jasper in this story. It is different then Jasper in twilight (and other stories) but at the same time it is still so Jasper. I can't wait for the next chapter.
dellatwi
2009-12-28 . chapter 6
Umm where to start I would like more fight details did it happen at the party? what did jake say to antagonize eddie?
also why is it that if any other male said women have unnecesarry feelings it would come off as sexist and all out rude but when he says it and says he likes it well I dunno its just sorta nice lol.
jdhsmomth
2009-12-27 . chapter 6
I love this story but, Bella is pissing me off. She can't have her cake and eat it too. How will she ever know if she can love somebody or be loved in the correct way if she doesn't let somebody in. She needs to put herself in Edwards shoes for a change. Edward has every right not to want Jake touching her the way he does. She wouldn't want some girl touching Edward like that. I think maybe Jasper's words of wisdom may have opened her eyes a little. I hope so anyway. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Shayla.x.Caillat
2009-12-27 . chapter 6
update. now.
Luvntwilight
2009-12-27 . chapter 6
Jasper cracks me up.
cnelson
2009-12-27 . chapter 6
I love Jasper.
He's so complex yet so natural and entrancing.
He keeps you interested in a completely relaxing way.
Amazing job by the way Car :)
Oshin37
2009-12-26 . chapter 6
i luv jasper!! plz plz plzz put him in more!! my favorite 2 musicians have got 2 be gavin degraw and one republic. cnt wait 4 another update!!
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