This was interesting. However, the lines should be spaced apart farther. That is all I can say.

It's moving, in a soberly solemn way. I like it being manga based, but i like it most because of the way you described every detail and feeling of the Outers about the end of Silver Millennium and their unknown, uncertain future.
And you put a glimpse of the tendernerness and friendship between future Endymion and Pluto.
Beautiful.

Very good story! *Applauds* Wow! I really like it alot! Write more!