Really good story! I loved the interactions between the Outer Senshi. This story really reflected the loneliness they endured... to walk back to the remains of an empire they protected and fiercely loved. Really great storyline. I also love the Endymion/Pluto interaction... I've always been a fan of their relationship. They're like a pair of friends who appreciate and admire one another. Good start on a trilogy. I'll be reading the rest of it really soon!

This was interesting. However, the lines should be spaced apart farther. That is all I can say.

It's moving, in a soberly solemn way. I like it being manga based, but i like it most because of the way you described every detail and feeling of the Outers about the end of Silver Millennium and their unknown, uncertain future.

And you put a glimpse of the tendernerness and friendship between future Endymion and Pluto.

Beautiful.

Very good story! *Applauds* Wow! I really like it alot! Write more!