This was really touching. It was very sweet and I enjoyed it alot. Thank you.

aw this is adorable

Aw, how sweet! Simply lovely, although a rather odd situation. but you handled it beautifully, so well done!! :)

A very interesting and unique look at the characters. Thank you for sharing!

That was a very very good story! To tell the truth the 1st person set me off a bit because I've never read a first person Mary poppins. So I ended up being pleasantly surprised! All in all excellent job, even though I'm not a huge fan of the lyrics all clumped together like that. I really liked it!! :)

Oh that was beautifuly done. And you nailed Mary Poppins charater (well I think you did). I can't think of anything more to say to sum up just how I found that story