This was much better. I love the emotions in this story. Very good.

Another geat chapter of this trilogy, dealing with some of my favourite chapters in the superS manga, and (ful)filling some gaps.

It's difficult to eview without being repetitive, but yor writing skills are such that I only can say 'bravo' and bow my head to you.

How do you find the time to write all of this? It's amazing! I really like it!