Can't wait for the next chapter!

Hey, I love your stories!! I would also like to suggest that you write from Dorian's point of view. I have always loved the chemistry between the two characters. Anyway, I check you stories every day to see if you have added anything. So, always remember to keep writing.

Your Fanitic,

2sweet4u

I hope to see more of this soon. Chapter 6 was well written, I liked how Mina explains that she will not feed on the crew, how she gets a little crossed with Quatermain, and how she feels a little uneasy around Hyde. Very good story.

Yay! I was hoping you would do this chapter! Very nicely done. Update soon!

I must say that in chapter six, you've quite outdone yourself. I am impressed.

It's an interesting story thus far. However, I do agree that it would be more beneficial for you to deter from the story every now and then. The fact remains is that they didn't give Mina enough attention in the movie.

I can see many different ways in which this story can turn.

Keep it up!

great job love mina's point of veiw i think shold do skinner's pov becase there are not alot of storys about skinner

Well, the story is good, but I find skipping the Jekyll/Hyde scene a little disappointing to be honest. Of course, the extra bit between Mina and Dorian is helpful for their love/hate relationship.

A poll for choosing another POV? I'll head there right away!

You're quite welcome. FOr the poll, I think you should do Sawyer's POV. Update soon!!

I do think this story is alright, it follows the movie line exactly and Mina is well kept in character along with the observations she makes of the others. Perhaps the chapters could be a bit longer and there could be more to Mina's thoughts such as deeper observations of the other characters she meets. I recall when she is imitating Quatermain's voice that she must have offered her assistance for the hunt in Paris, so the missing scene could always be a good addition to use. Be creative and have a some fun with it. ;)

Please do not think that I am reviewing merely to obtain the promised 6th chapter, I would also like to compliment you on your work and offer a few constructive notes based upon my own opinion.

I very much enjoyed the scenes from the perspective of Mina. You were very accurate in remembering the lines and the sets. However, perhaps you could incorporate more of Mina's thoughts and emotions. Play around with the character, give her a back story and a reason for felling what she does. Perhaps you could mention about her feelings towards her curse, or the previous interludes she and Dorian had. I think that this would give the character much more depth.

Thanks for your stories, and I look forward to reading more.
Cate.

Again, love the story. I hope you continue it.

Brilliant! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Update soon!

Hmm...I find this retelling from Mina's point of view very interesting, I hope you don't give up on it.(I know, it can be kinda discouraging when you don't get many reviews.) The only thing I really have to critique on is that there are times when you just have a lot of dialoque going on, with hardly any description. But maybe "your" Mina isn't concerned about details lol, so if that's how you wanted to take things then I hope I don't offend. Please post again soon!

I love this story! Mina is my favorite character in the movie and I love reading it from her point of view.Please update!