Good start! Although a bit confusing, I'm liking it. Cloris is <3! :)

Very well written pair of chapters here! I'm also impressed in the way you handled Cloud's perception of what was occurring, and the brief, bittersweet reunion between Zack and Cloud. That Aerith will be accompanying him, however long that might be, is great.

Looking forward to more!

*_*
so pretty
I kept having goosebumps all over this tale
it was so emotional and precise! I simply loved it!

This was beautiful. =)