oh yeah its good and its funny as well

love it! you should totaly continue this great story! i cant wait for chapter 2!

Nice. I liked how you portrayed Serena as a person with a bottemless stomach, yet didn't make her seem as if she's the cry baby/winer the televison makers her out to be. I also like how you empisised the people's chararter. Pretty nice twist to a such normal type of an story plot. I like! :)

This is an amazing story, i just hope i can find out what happens soon! I think the writing is great and the story idea is fabulous.

nice so are you planning to addd anything anytime soon?

hey that was really good, can u do another chapter of this story?, well if u will i'll be the first one to read it

I wonder if spparks will fly? probably but they're probably gonna argue first and then some! I like it so far it looks as if its going to be a good story! ja

CONTINUE!

This is awesome. I can't wait to find out what happens next...please continue!

Ugh well crap dude! What happens after that? It's going great but you should keep writing it!

oooohhhh... i'm hooked... plz continue. :)

welllll?...*sighs*...guess i have to wait huh?...oh well...

Hey! Great story! It looks like its going to turn out to be a good story but theres only what way to find out! more chapters out soon will tell us that it's a good story! more onegai!

ja ne _

It IS awesome! Youve gotta keep going

Cute...

Kit