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Jilian
2009-12-15 . chapter 2
Addicted to this fanfic since the beginning.
I've just read it again, and suddenly I felt that all this ... thing just may have happened too quickly. Remember they were playing chess at the very beginning^^?
Please a sequel, the story is not finished yet><

Forgive my bad english if there's anything wrong in it^^;;
RomanticistHierarchy
2009-12-09 . chapter 2
Wondrously written, very well kept in character and with marvelous artiulation. The length of each chapter was perfect, for each paragraph made you beg for the next. A sequel is not requested on my part, since where it was left off is quite great, comical too. You are a simply astounding author, and I hope you keep this blessing for many years to come.

Amazed Reviewer,
RomanHigh.
Just-Corey
2009-11-30 . chapter 2
Awesome. Although, it would be nice to know just how big the Holly of this story is.

I've read quite ah few of them that use the radiation from the second book, the DNA (eye) transfer from the 5th, etc. to help explain the size issue.

Anyhoozer, I think that I'm going to use this as a reference for some of my own writing.

PS. Sequel, and how you tackle the size problem, would be nice.
katiehorse
2009-11-28 . chapter 2
sequal plz :) i thought it was really good :) i think you should somehow change Artemis into a fairy so they can do it properly ?
Poseidon's son
2009-11-21 . chapter 2
Please have a sequel =)
Star
2009-11-15 . chapter 2
please make a sequal i liked this lemon though i usally dont
moi
2009-11-08 . chapter 2
love it!
FantasyScienceFictionFan
2009-11-07 . chapter 2
Please make a sequel! This is an amazing story!
Umbra-Luna
2009-11-06 . chapter 2
Hi, jusst quickly can you make a sequil?

Till next time,

Umbra-Luna
Nadeshikoblossem
2009-11-05 . chapter 1
dudee!
this story is awesome!
the way its written!
you were able to write artemis's charactor just like in the book
i really love this fanfic, im pretty sure its the best artemis fowl fanfic iv'e read!
keep writing! =D

2009-11-03 . chapter 2
Oh my God this story was awesome. It is not like reading a regular erotic fic but almost like reading an actual book. there is so much emotion here that it is just awesome. You deserve every bit of praise you get. I would love to see many more sequels from you. Great job!!
Michaylalove
2009-10-31 . chapter 2
this is so awesome please update soon this is incredible
W0lflink
2009-10-27 . chapter 2
SEQUEL. Fin.. For now
Hallegra
2009-10-26 . chapter 2
SEQUAL!
Alex Oblivion
2009-10-26 . chapter 2
Hi there

I just finished reading both chapters of Like a Lollipop, and they were wonderful. I would love to see a sequel.

The biggest formal flaw I found in the first chapter was that there was a lot of switching between past and present tenses, but that got much better in the second chapter. You were really descriptive, which was awesome.

Of course, the characters were a bit out of character but that's to be expected, and I did find it believable for the most part.

All in all it was a great read and like I said, I would love to see a sequel. Thanks!

AO
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