OH MY GOODNESS! SUPER EPIC CHAPTER! Raoul's a tool... though i love him, he is super toolish... The hormonal chrissy made me smile, cause even erik wouldn't know what to do in that situation. I was so sad when nadir died! WHY MUST HE ALWAYS DIE!??

Oh crap, why could Nadir not shot him through the head? Stupid little prick. lol I hope this stay does not last long. Erik deserves to see the birth of his child.

OH NO! This is terrible! It's hard not to get frustrated with Christine, but I understand that she's lived a horribly sheltered life and that hours of embroidery aren't really the best training to marry a Political Revolutionary. Oh well. LOVE THIS STORY!

Awesome chapter, but I need to know what happens next, so PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Thanks!

Li Li

OH NO! My greatest fear has happened - Raoul has her back!

And poor Nadir died tryng to save her.

I am so glad Erik kissed her goodbye-glad that she asked for it. But it broke my heart when he said there would be no possibility to ever get her back. I don't think I can stand that.

This was the first chapter in a long time that truly broke my heart - I hope she is able to get back to Erik before the baby is born.

Please update really soon. She needs to be back with Erik and her brother!

Wow - talk about action. (I feel like I haven't reviewed in forever, so here I am.) I love the story, and it's progressing very nicely. Raoul was a complete surprise for me, and I'm certain he will only make things much more interesting. I wonder if he's going to find out it's Erik's before birth or even after birth. Like always, I eagerly await the next chapter.
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Poor Christine-her attempt to escape with Nadir fails-but at least Raoul treats her kindly-what will Erik say when he finds she is with him? Great action sequence-thanks! Now what?:)

LOL, I caught the "dear" and "darling" too. Well, that is one step to putting together the pieces, but there is still so much for them to learn about one another and where they are going from here. Does he know that the baby is his or has that not sunk in yet?

Wonderful! It was really exciting to read Erik's story-your mind is just so creative!

I liked the ending with Christine fixating on those terms of endearment from him!

This story just gets more and more interesting!

This is great-finally Erik shares his past with Christine-and his story is mesmerizing-thanks! I'm glad Christine is becoming more comfortable with him-thanks! More please?:)

Good backstory! That explains a considerable amount, especially how someone could infiltrate the government like that.

I particularly liked the line about governments and people who want to overthrow them. It's quite true.

Phantom Jedi

YAY! I loved it! Sorry I haven't reviewed in a long time... Anyways, this is turning out real nice! When I read I almost imagine it like a movie! I have to admit I was confused about her saying that she heard him say dear and darling, because I didn't remember that. So I pushed Ctrl+f and searched the words and they were in there! He sopke it as if he didn't notice he was calling her that!

Cool chapter! I loved the last line, where she only remembered two words :) That just seems hilarious, here he pours out his entire, intense life story, and she focuses on two words. Update soon!

Li Li

Hey, sorry I haven't reviewed in a while! Sometimes I do and sometimes I don't. I just wanted to recap all of the things I LOVE about this story!!
I like how you don't stick to cliches, your story is engaging, interesting, and infuriatingly unpredictable. That's why I am so happy when you update! :D It just brightens up my day when I pop into and see that you've updated. Your story is unique while still maintaining the integrity of the characters in the situations you put them. Not to mention, you change their personalities a little bit according to the situation, so it really is quite believable.
As always, your writing is excellent, and this recent update certainly did not disappoint. I really love the direction it is going to now, and I REALY can't wait until the next chapter with Erik and Christine.

Thanks so much for writing!

I LOVED it !

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Great chapter! The next chapter should be interesting, to say the least, so get to work writing it so we can see what happens!

Li Li