this the most awesome naruto-yet not that i've ever read! powers- explosions/ absorption/ any element/ mind reading/ bone pulse/

Those loaders Damien used for his revolvers are called 'speed loaders.' Figured it would help later on for when he appeared again.

Now for his chemical bullets. I thought explosions made her shields stronger, since they produce light. I guess the power increase isn't enough to deal with the overwhelming damage levels. Though it is nice to see a regular human who can go toe to toe with strong users and bat them around a bit.

Oh yeah, I'm cheering every time I see a girl go nuts for Naruto. Ino is like one of those blushing maidens (looks at Hinata) while Sakura is the fiery type. Love how she told off that robot.

While on the subject, how exactly was Eight going to 'enjoy' Naruto before killing him?

Final thing: I guess Kiba's power is kinetic redirection or psychokinesis. I'm leaning more towards kinetic redirection though, dog boy doesn't strike me as being smart enough to have any psychic powers.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

When is the next chapter coming out. I know you have other stuff to do but i really like this one. Ill try to come up with a power. And what was all that phsyc line stuff. But anyway keep up the good work.

I have an idea for a power, and the character who uses it.

The character is killer bee as for the power he can bend and comprense air particles into swords, and since they're made out of air they're almost invisible, he controls them using his brainwaves. His codename is Rapper, and his power is called ventos.

I have a seggestion for a power. Its the power to put a veil around someone completely shutting off there sense of sight, smell, and hearing. as for the character who has it I was thinking it could be Itachi. And it wouldn't matter if he was a rouge or a lost order.

This is the best fanfiction i've ever read. Your awesome at this. No matter what someone says to you keep making fanfictions.

is this based off of something? if so what is it? the powers are amazing i like the concept. everything. if it doesn't exist then it should

really unique idea. i like it so far.

Really liking this. Small note, you need three more zeroes for trillion. It goes millions, billions then trillions.

it is great when will there be more it is just getting really good

An alright chapter, personally liked Naruto/Sasuke fight alot better than the girls fight vs the seekers. Can't wait for an update.

Wow that was amazing! I got a question though what's a Phych-line by the way? What is Kiba's and Hinata's powers?

well that was good but i am a little sad to see yamato as a bad guy oh well hope to see more thanks

Very nice. you always do good work.

I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE YOUR STORY! KEEP UP THE AWESOME WORK AND OH! HERE'S A SUPERPOWER SUGGESTION! THE PERSON CANNOT DIE WHAT'S IT CALLED AGAIN? INTANGIBILTY? I THINK THAT'S IT :3 THEY ALSO NEED TO BE SUPERSTRONG COULD BE A 2-WAY THREAT TO THE BADDIES TEE-HEE! :3