Owoow! YOu are an awesome writer! :D

So short, but so beautiful!

This made me so happy

Takeru and Mako is lovee!

Pretty good one-shot. I liked it.

Wow first time i read a TakeruxMako fic since i'm more of a TakeruxKohota person but hey i like both pairings anyway good story write more

awesome little fic!

This is an adorable vignette! Very well written - the tense does a great job of keeping your attention - and something I could easily see as a "missing moment" of sorts from the show. I like how, even though the focus stays on Takeru and Mako, the brief mentions of the other team members are *so* in character. (I particularly chuckled at the debate over the sentai roll call.) Fantastic job!

Yay! I like it. I like how you portrayed their relationship.

Awesome one-shot. You captured the characters really well. I really liked that you did not use any dialogue. I thought it was an interesting choice, whether it was intentional or not. Also, I really liked the perspective taken on the character's relationship.