That was long, but I liked it. You should add more!

That was spectacular. Well, most of your work is spectacular, but myself, slowly wading through your Final Fantasy and Kingdom Hearts fics, this one really stands out. Might just be because of it's length, or it could be something else.

there really are no words to fully say how lovely this many times i read this,i always feel a bit in awe.i would love to read more this,if you and good night

I couldn't help but admire the way you used Riku Replica and the question of art for company. This is such a well thought out fic, and you nailed the character interaction perfectly... Axel seeing Roxas in Namine...And well, I just love your Marluxia. _

I wish I could read more fics like yours, especially with these characters! /

I can't believe no one has reviewed this yet. It was long, yes, but that didn't make it any less good - in fact, the depth and detail made it even better. Perhaps it's because it's a story about Namine and Marluxia; neither of them seem to be very popular, from what I've seen. Oh well.

I actually like that you went indepth with Namine; you gave her more of a personality than Chain of Memories did, and you gave explanations and motivations for why she did what she did. The dolls that she made were certainly a nice touch; I can imagine her making them and playing with them, because she always did seem to be very artistic, even if her drawings left something to be desired.

All in all, great work, Scribbler. )

-Umi