 annstar5647 2009-11-18 . chapter 1aww that is so cute! i love your works and i look foward for the next installation. =] |
 Hesunohana 2009-11-14 . chapter 1 well-written (the point of vue was absolotely fabulous !!) adn so great !! |
 EarthGurdian 2009-07-06 . chapter 1I still can't believe how much I love your writing. Every new story the you post is more wonderful than the last. So thank you for all of your wonderful writing. I just have one request though, could you at some point in the future write a story that will give us more information about the marriage between Abel and Esther being approved by the Pope. I would love to read about that. Thanks again for the wonderful work and I'm hoping to read another one soon.
~EarthGurdian |
 Lil-Rahl 2009-06-23 . chapter 1Squeek! :3 It's cute and sweet and makes you feel all fuzzy inside. The parenting emotions are very strong and deep. (Gives you Cookies). Though when you brought in the bunny for her daughter I instantly thought of CON AIR with Nicloas Cage. (Ever seen it? If not watch it. You'll cry.) Very good (Hand you a dozen more cookies.) Job well done. I absolutely love your Milk Tea Series. |
 Shadowmaiden3 2009-06-21 . chapter 1So when I saw this I was like, "Oh, yay! another in the series!" but when I started reading I thought, "Oh no, not second person, I really like your writing but I don't know if I can stand reading a mediocre second person fic, no matter who it's by."
I am SO happy that you proved me as wrong as ever. This was just as good as I've come to expect from you.
I would usually quote a favourite line here, but that is going to take too long to rewrite the story.
lots of love and no writer's blocks to you!
~Shadow |
 Seirei Nightlord05 2009-06-21 . chapter 1Hi...
Aw...So cute...I Just finished reading this story and I had read "All I wish is to dream again" and "Broken Wings" and I just decided after a lot of thought (Afraid my files in my laptop becomes a mess) to read all your others stories that are related to this story...
Okay..Bye2... |
 mlkoolc86 2009-06-21 . chapter 1That was excellent! The ending was just beautiful. I liked the second person point of view writing that was real creative. I really felt like I was in the story.
Francesco is very bold to be pulling off attacks like that, but I'm not suprised. It will be interesting to read about in your other fic(s) about how things go down between him and Alessandro. Well, look forward to your future work! |
 Donna della Penna 2009-06-20 . chapter 1Aw, I love Zac! =3
Warrior Order or not, go Sister Madeleine! |
 SageofAges729 2009-06-20 . chapter 1SQUUE! That is so cute at the end! Wonderful job as usual, and an interesting twist with the stunt Medici pulled. Definately a possibility, but what happened to the Inquisition? I honestly can't see Petros following him, although others from his branch might've. Keep up the amazing work, hope to see more soon! (Oh, and have you seen the latest TB manga? Go to onemanga dot com, they have some interesting chapters up for the beginning of the Albion Arc.) |
 Ayame1313 2009-06-20 . chapter 1OHH Another Milk Tea story! I absolutely adore these!! ^_^ Awesome job! |
 AtticusBlackwolf 2009-06-20 . chapter 1Aw cute<3 really good job. It's also great to hear more from you. |
 Hekateras 2009-06-20 . chapter 1Wonderful. :) Very interesting second person perspective, I don't believe I've actually read any stories in this style aside from choose-your-own-adventure types... The whole thing gave me a fuzzy 'aw' feeling. :) Beautifully written. |