I really liked the pace you were taking with this story. A lot of authors (myself included) feel the need to rush intimate scenes, but you really took your time explaining everything they were feeling and doing and (as wrong as it may sound in this context:P) it felt as a reader like you were there with them.
I'd love to read some kind of follow-up on this story, about them growing closer and exploring the possibiolities of a real relationship and all...(but then again that might be my romantic girly side talking :P)

I freakin love this story... I read it a while ago and I loved it then ^_^ Thanxs for postin it here. I love the way you write Heero and Duo.

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You're writing amazes me once again. Great descriptions, great dialogue. Ah, I love it. . .

I love this story. I can't see why you'd be worried about no one liking it or wanting to read it. I read this a while back on your site. Truth be told, I've read at least half if not more of your fics. I think you'd do well if you posted this fic's companion piece "I think I'm gay" I really loved that one alot. But mostly because it's 3x4 and Quatre was so gosh darn cute and unsure in it. Don't wory... I always love your work, even if I don't say so!

WHYWHOPEWyriy r;a why must you stop here?

No

You must continue. I need to know more.

Also I noticed one (their) you used in the wrong place that I thought I'd throw out for you, in case you missed it. "He found his arms encircling Duo's waist, how they had gotten (their) he didn't know and nor did he care" It should be the (there) there. :)

WHAT?!
What do you mean 'tbc'?! TT TT
You make me cry. . .please update soon! (begging, if you didn't notice ^^)

Must have more!

kawaii!! please continue!! owo I think the answer to the 'am I gay' question is a yes for heero.. ^3^

Dont end it there...thats not fair!...plz plz plz contiue this and i love all ur other storys as well...but still plz plz dont leave it hanging