I thought the whole story was really very good. The only slight points to make are that Oscar Blaketon as a character was not actually a gossip, in fact he detested it and he would never have said please or thank you. Apart from that, it's a wonderful piece of FanFic!

n'aw i love this xx

aha, i knew that was coming :P

skyee xx

(: haha i love this :)

o, i wonder how it will end hmm...

:) update please

skyee x

hi x

love this haha, i could imagine it :)

update please :D

skye x

o !

nicee x update soon please

becky xx :D