Ah, I have to say, rereading this brings back some very old but very fond memories. I miss the old days on LFG with the crew. Sorry, feeling nostalgic in my review of this, but I just can't help it! xD Anyway, always loved these stories even back then and was sad things went the way they did and you gave up on LFG. Oldies but goldies as they say.

Well, not necessarily. OCXCanon is a symptom, not a cause. There are genuinely good stories with OCXCanon. It's just that a lot of bad stories like to incorporate Mary Sue OCs.

Granted, this one is a crummy story. I have written others where people liked the OC pairing, but this isn't one I consider "good."

Thanks for the advice, anyhow.

Also, for future reference, this was a very early story of mine. *shrug*

Rule #1 of Fanfic: An easy way to tell if a story is bad is to see if it has the following pairing: Canon Character x OC