Man I loved this story, I used to hate 5Ds but now I'm like wicked into it and I love Jack Atlas and Yusei Fudo as a couple. I especially like Yusei he's cute, and Jack is sexy. I love the word play on the word Ukulele I love your story Its really good

You... are... a god! (I have an account and if I wasn't so lazy I'd favorite this ten times over!) After a rough day of exams, this is EXACTLY what I need! XD If only I could read a fic like this after every exam day! w00t! JackxYuusei! (Yeah I spell it with two u's XD. Bet yer jealous!((jk)).)

the most unfortunate series of events happened to me when i read the "im a guy" part.

i for some reason decided to drink some water while reading...? and it was like a perfect spit-take from a cartoon. but it got all over my homework. then i was choking on some water, and i fell out of my computer chair. i bumped the desk and my speaker fell off and the headphones unplugged. it started blasting music, scared the hell out of my dog, who then started running away. she ran into me, knocked me completely over(i was sitting on the floor aat this point) and stepped on my face.

i really wish i could make up things like this. oh. my. goodness. i dont have to worry about heart attacks, i have to worry about everything else...

anyway. you are a truly amazing author. maybe even (id never just throw this around) stephen king good.
buut. (theres always a but)

the part where youre talking about the strumming, it says 'I licked his lips, withdrawing my lower into his mouth,'

I WAS TOTALLY CONFUSED. i thought they were making out all of a sudden. which didnt make sense with this story. at that point. but ive yakked enough... :] sorry.

Dud your the first guy I have seen on fanfiction and the first one to write Yaoi. And you did it better than some of the girls. Thank you for knowing what grammar and spelling are.

Dude! This manga is great and are u japanase? Ar u gay? and here, this is my email, we should get together!

Awsome fic!! :D

WOAH! I did NOT expect this to be written by a guy, but heart attack was pretty far away from what I was doing, more like drooling XD M Yusei is hot ^_^ Anywayz, great story!

cute foreplay, nice lemon too. nice pun with the ukulele too. nice story!!

Dude...
Ur my new hero this was so so awsome.

that was really something!! and i loved it LOL

*has a heart attack* j/p x3!
guys can like/love shonen-ai/yaoi too..no one said its a 'female' thing...but glad to know another..^^

OMFG! Your a guy?! I can't believe that! I haven't meant a guy that writes this stuff! This is totally my first time knowing a guy writes this stuff, too! OMG! Are you gay or something?! I'm not saying it to be mean or anything but I'm just totally shocked! SERIOUSLY.

BTW, wonderful story! So cute~! Still, I'm pretty much still shocked!

o.0
Wow, that was very discriptive.
But however I liked it.:)
And don't worry nobody really cares if your a boy and like yaoi.
Heck, there are even girls who like yuri.All that matters is that
you like it!XD
Well, good luck with your other stories and bye!
signed, Newbie

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Nica likes. Very much.

Why would I have a heart attack dude? Your brilliant.

This is the first fic Iv'e read on 5D'S, and have to say it's AWESOME. (already in my faves)!

Very sensible motives there at the bottom, heh! xx