Good God, reading your writing is like breaking off a chip of sky and holding beauty in my hands.

Aw! It should have happened that way!

I bet you can't even COMPREHEND how awesome this is.

i never would have thought of a story like this! awesome job :)

Wow, that was beautiful. If only the book could have been just like that...

-Lu

aw, that was cute :)I'm glad he took charge of his own destiny

this new style is interesting!
i'm not sure if i like your new all lowercase all the time thing but i should not judge since that is how i roll.
and i love the dreams thing! what a great way to carry it through the piece and the ending line is SO LOVELY.

by the way.
yeah.
you were supposed to write me a story
and you told me it was going to be done
LAST WEEK
and it was not
and i was a little upset.
and i still think you should write me one
because i like to read stories
and you are way cool.
<3 you.

Wow. I think I like this ending better than the real one, or maybe that's 'cause I haven't read A Separate Peace, and I don't like it when people die. It makes me sad...*sniffles* I love you and your writing. Maybe I'm biased, but you rock my socks off...