Not very long or detailed.

oh, so sad, but good. I liked it a lot. Btw why have they broken up? Tc Tc, they still seemed pretty in love. :P

It kinda confused me but i still like it.

uhm, did they broke up? and the scenes the were togther were only memories?

then why did they broke up? pls tell me...(n.n)

:)

Very good - I thought this was really sweet! I wasn't sure about the sheer amount of text in bold - it rather outnumbered the fic (and you are really lacking in disclaimers - I'd sort that ASAP as you can lose your account for that) but otherwise I really liked it. Well done.

It's a little confusing at the end.. is that a flashback? Or do they actually meet up. This was good over all though.

amazing so far, keep this going