 Jimmelfan12 2009-11-28 . chapter 6I've read the last chapter like a million ted and I can't wait for the next one please update soon |
 8RainbowBright8 2009-11-16 . chapter 6 Oh my god I hope they make up soon I dont like it when the fight.
I like that they talk about everything but PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE |
 EverCharmed 2009-11-16 . chapter 6OMYGOD!
THAT WAS GREAT. update NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW!! pLEAse you cannot LEAVE US HANGIN LIKE THAT. WRITE, NOW
XXEVACHARMEDXX
PS: sorry about being so demanding, lol |
 MFarag 2009-11-16 . chapter 6Just read the whole story, and wow this fanfic is awesome!! Love it :D and definitely loved this chapter...Can't wait to read more:) |
 Mel&Jimfan12 2009-11-07 . chapter 5 Great chapter I love this story so so so much Please Please Please Please Please Update soon I can't wait to read more |
 Little Miss Cullen Cutie 2009-11-06 . chapter 5 Nice! Interesting to see the characters portrayed through Melinda's writing!
~Little Miss Cullen Cutie~ |
 EverCharmed 2009-11-06 . chapter 5LOL about holly. that chappie rocked, I hope u write more soon. SON WOMAN> itwas very god. jimmel rocks...and I lyke that word...
xEvaCharmedx |
 8RainbowBright8 2009-09-09 . chapter 4 please update soon I love this story |
 Little Miss Cullen Cutie 2009-09-06 . chapter 4 Jim and Melinda 4ever! Is he that much older than she is? I love it! Love how you worked in the Umbrella Room!
Update soon!
~Little Miss Cullen Cutie~ |
 Jimmel 2009-07-23 . chapter 3 Great chapter I really liked it I can't wait for the next one Please update soon |
 Van 2009-07-23 . chapter 3 such a great great great story! <3<3<3 I love it! |
 Mel&Jimfan12 2009-07-23 . chapter 3 This was the cutest chapter ever I really hope u update soon |
 EverCharmed 2009-07-23 . chapter 3Woah! Great storyline... wonderful stuff!
I love how you created that mood, just perfect! I don't really think you need any of my suggestions, cos your writing is too good...I can't think of anything. But, are you gonna put Andrea into this any time soon...bye!
KEEP IT UP!! |
 Jim & Mel 4-ever 2009-07-13 . chapter 2 I think this is a great story I like the idea of the diary
Please update soon |
 Monkeywand 2009-06-27 . chapter 2That last part made me laugh. Poor Jim. All his fireman buddies ganging up on him like that!! Can't wait to see what happens next!! PPMS
Monkeywand |