Aw that was cute... and very well written. I just have one littel piece of advice, when you have one person talking, you always start a new paragraph when a different person starts to talk, but other than that this story is very good.
Other than that this stroy is very, very good. Keep up the good work!
Good Job Mika!

SevyxMetatron hehe XD Metatron Would Get Crushed oh my xD but good job Mika Have You Surpassed ur writers block ;L