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Your Shadow Light
2009-08-25 . chapter 1
xD
That's great, that's simply great!
I have this whole scene playing out in my head and I love it!
Haigha3
2009-08-06 . chapter 1
Absolutely Hilarious, brought a smile to my face from the first paragraph!
I Dance Alone
2009-07-23 . chapter 1
Hahaha. I like this story quite a bit, it's very funny! I can completely believe Ron and Harry's reaction to Victoria's Secret.
~Rae
Katherine-The-Crowned
2009-07-13 . chapter 1
*can't stop laughing* It's brilliant. I love it! And I love how in character Luna is in such a situation.

Great job!
Trickster Puppet
2009-06-28 . chapter 1
I'm giggling madly at this :3
Larry <3
Fibinaci
2009-06-24 . chapter 1
very nice sweet, sexy and funny.
Jazzcat
2009-06-23 . chapter 1
*laughs and laughs and laughs*

Okay, okay. You've never posted a warning at the beginning of one of your chapters - not of the one's I've read so far, that is. So I proceeded with caution, but it turned out so well!

First, they're all married. Big kudos for that! If their wives want to shop at Victoria's Secret, then by all means! *laughs* It was hilarious - how Luna and Hermione went back and forth, though, right in front of their poor husbands. That was great.

This gem has to go on my favorites list. Beautifully done!

Jazzcat
IRRISSE
2009-06-21 . chapter 1
I love Luna and Harry together, and I think was so funny.
Kittyboosmom
2009-06-21 . chapter 1
Cute story, but I can't imagine Harry & Luna together. She is SO out there! Very wise in a lot of ways, but still a bit too far out there I would think for Harry. But then I'm prejudiced, since kind of stick to JKR's canon for her characters. Now OC's--that's another story.

Still, the story was cute fluff--I enjoyed it.

Have a great weekend.
snape504
2009-06-20 . chapter 1
Absolutely delightful. Wonderful to read.
Thank you.
PrimiGrl
2009-06-20 . chapter 1
lmao the wizarding world meets victorias secret xD

you should have some slytherins meet that store. i always thouht that if anyone was especially kinky, it would be the slytherins
good job by the way
Isis the Sphinx
2009-06-20 . chapter 1
*giggle* LOL.
Oh, that was just priceless. I see kids in their future. That was just brilliant. Keep writing!
amber'eyed'countess
2009-06-20 . chapter 1
so funny!
Aealket
2009-06-20 . chapter 1
Hi
That was a very fun little tale.
Nice, very nice
Alan
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