Out of all the 'Mystery Spot' fics out there (and believe me, I've read most of them...) yours is definitely the best one. You've managed to capture the desperation so well I was really feeling for poor Sam, to have his hope crushed in such a way yet again... good job! (Yeah I love angst^.^)

I especially liked the beginning with the short clips of what Sam's thought - I imagine it must feel exactly like that for him, days and days of unending misery with nothing to remember from them but Dean's death.

Plus your Dean was amazingly IC, really I love the 'immortal' part and the way he reacts to Sam after he had broken the clock is spot on.

Seriously, this story is exactly what I have been looking for, thanks for taking your time to write it:-)

wow, u just reminded me just how tragic that episode actually is... wow that has REALLY got to suck... like seriously... idk, if i was sam i dont think i coulda gotten through that sane lol and i mean at the end when dean's telling sam he'd try to remember this time, that was where u really broke my heart:( but absolutely awesome writing, very powerful and i gotta go be depressed for a while now hahaha

*is sobbing* Gawd, that was just...AMAZING!! Absolutely one of the best stories I have ever read. Ever. Infused with emotion and passion and love between the brothers. The emotions were so real, FELT so real, I forgot for a minute it was fiction. Sam's heartache was my heartache. I felt everything they felt. Wow. That was just brilliant, I tell ya, I think I may have to read it again right now because there was so much greatness to it. Excellent job. You are wonderfully talented. I can't wait to read some more!
Lily

Aww poor Sammy @.o This was soo good and I loved this episode to pieces!! I was waiting for something like this to happen in that episode because watching your brother die every single day has got to take a toll on you eventually @.o Poor thing...Excellent story as always sweetie!! Keep up the great work!! ^.-

I really loved that.
Sam was so heartbroken... and Dean was... just him.. :D
And I LOVE him... so perfect work.

"I've decided -- not to die."

So sad

guh...that was my first reaction...guh...
on then OMG so sad...
and then LOL

and aw so sad!

and the ending, I mean Sam going through THAT again and then Heat of the moment and then Dean's Rise and shine, Sammy and guh...so sad! and awesome and ...
I liked your Dean in this story...ehehehehe...!

I really REALLY liked this!

S.

Whoa, nice one, Karen. Mystery Spot is one of my favorite episodes, too. And it's a writer's paradise, full of angst and owies and figuring out new and different ways for Dean to die, and then come back again for round 2 or 35 or 90.
Sue

Wow, this was great! You so nailed Sam's thoughts.

I loved all of it but my two favourite parts:

"Time's broken," I whispered past the lump, that had only grown larger.
"Of course it is." I heard the bed squeaking. "You Broke it." I listened to Dean fumble with the clock, trying to fix time.

Now that was hilarious, even stuck there in the middle of all that angst and Sammy-fretting.

The second was your description of their code, Dean's way of communicating. He does that - you nailed it right on. Really touching.

Very well done - thanks for sharing it!

-Corrie