Wow...!!
THIS STORY IS SOO CUTEE...!! ♥
BELIEVE ME! WHEN YIN SAID THAT, MY MOUTH WAS TOTALLY OPEN BUT I KNOW THAT WITH THIS, YUCK WILL BE SO HAPPY! :D
AND YANG IS A REALLY GOOD BROTHER :) THIS IS SOO CUUTE! ♥
I REALLY LIKED THIS STORY...!! YOU ARE SO GOOD AT IT...! :D

-speechless-... Darn, I thought school made people smarter. I gots nothing to say! :(( But I CAN say that I can't wait for what's next! Maybe Yang will stop it? Maybe Yin will? Maybe a meteorite will? Only time will tell, well, update will tell, well, NEVERMIND.

Well this ending was definitely more satisfying than the first. Great job!

Aw, too bad this is only a oneshot. Yay! Yin is getting married to Yuck! Awesome story, though I feel kind of bad for Yang.

YAY More more morE! PLEASE!

I get what you're trying to tell, and if you fix up your grammer and paragraphs you could have a really, really good story. Have fun and keep practicing!

Poor Yang. Yay Yin!!(and Yuck)
-Sam

YAY! Yin and Yuck are getting married! X3