i love it

:D :D :D peter x john! really? FINALLY. <3 i love it already.

just a suggestion: it wouldn't hurt to add just a slight more descriptions and more activity in each chapter. :]

love it, wonderful, bravo. update as soon as you can <3

That is pretty good you should really continue :D

peter still looks like a kid, right? or is he an adult? and wen ur 18 ur not really considered a kid its more like a young adult or something (but i guess peter wouldnt know that :-P ha-ha

im already planning wats happening next but i bet ur version of the storie comes out better
ill be waiting!

Ooh, I like! Update soon? Please?