Oh, please hurry.. I cant wait to see what Edward says about their trip... AND of course the wedding. You are going on to do the honeymoon arent you... oh please you must! awesome story by the way.

I really love this story! :) You have a way of bringing the characters more life making them seem more of a reality. you really have to continue past the honeymoon. Anxiously awaiting the update

MARIE AS YOU KNOW I LOVE YOUR PRELUDE AS I LOVE TWILIGHT SAGA! PLEASE KEEP WRITTING! YOU ARE AN AWSOME WRITTER!

LOVE,

REGINA

M ... Exquisite.

beautiful chapter!

I, for one, would love to read about "from dusk to dawn" for chapter 22. You're doing an amazing job with this story. It's wonderful. Thank you. Can't wait for more chapters!

This chapter was more than "presentable", it was great. Can't wait for more.

This was a very sexy chapter... I loved his list and how it was out of order... very good!

Oh I am so sad, there are not any more chapters to read after this one...will change that please?

Absolutely love this story, it fills in so many wonderful gaps.

Please keep the chapters coming, I would love for Edward to come back to her window after the boys are done with their night.

Um yeah...just found this story and "Oh my!" I love it, you have me caught up in the words!

And yes I ah ahem would like a story posted in addition to the part I chapter...how shameless does that make me?

Off to read more...

absolutely presentable! I was thrilled when I got my update email today, i love your story so much. i was a bit worried for a few days there, I thought you may have bailed out! This chapter was brilliantly written, I just love your ideas. So sad its ending but please tell me you are doing the honeymoon first? Please we need that! As for a sequel... I never liked the whole baby bit with breaking dawn so maybe you could do an alternative Breaking Dawn where Edward gets to change her simply because they want to and not because they had to. Anyway whatever you choose Ill be here reading, you rock!

great! serously amazing :)

This is a very beautiful parenthesis ... I guess too many Twilight fans really miss this kind of scenes in the books ;)...

I love the dialogues, they really respect their personalities ... Its obvious you kwow them ...

Have you considered writting Breaking Dawn from EPOV? please!

Liking the Alice POV! It's interesting being inside her head! I would love it if you extended Last night part I (but maybe because I am a perv...?) and I think it would sit nicely after this little narration from Alice. Well done :) x

Love the switch to Alice's POV, you captured her well, it was all very "Alice".