Great story! Very real characters and dialogue, and your style is good.

However, your grammar is less-than-stellar at some points; maybe you should look into a beta? Either way, it's not awful, just some stuff that would make it better.

I'm looking forward to the rest!

xo Ronnie

Oh, interesting. I'm a Chekov fan, and I can't wait to see how other crew members react to the, uh... unfortunate situation. *cries*

Very well written, and well characterized. Don't stop now! +Fave!

I like that this story involves Bones. I really hope we get to see some Emotional!Spock soon. (But not too much, or he won't be Spock)

Heartbreaking. Well written. Captivating. Would like to know more about how Chekov died.

Poor Chekov! Excellent job for your first fic. I love Kirk angst! ;)

Great start, you captured Bones and Kirk brilliantly, and I especially liked Bones' POV. Really hope you update this very very soon!
Take care :)

"child Captain"
I like that phrase. I'm way too tired to review properly, but I can tell you that I liked that phrase. Cheers.