You have almost written a story I have been thinking of for a long time. You let the crazy chinese amazons off too easy, my ending has the tribe wiped out. But I have goddesses visit to the the heavy hitting. Ranma's child is taken away by the goddese and Ranma reverted to infancy too. Then both get to be brought up by a goddes.

I think I'd have to agree with Calen here. If this were me, I would have made sure the Amazons saw their last day, STARTING with any children I had, NO MATTER HOW OLD THEY WERE.

Honestly, until I analyzed the Chinese Amazons in more detail, I don't think I'd had a genuinely racist/genocidal thought about anyone, even a fictitious people. I honestly believe that the Amazons, as a collective, do not deserve to live, and deserve whatever they get in retribution.

As far as Ranma being so casually dismissed from the tribe, look at it from the Elders point of view: they have what they want; offspring from Ranma. Why do you think I favor killing the kids FIRST? The Elders get to see their "hard work" go up in sprays of blood.

good story, enjoyed it, wonders what will happen next, byes

excellent

So basically Ranma gets raped unwillingly and has two kids and has been forced to give up his whole life and what does he do ?

Nothing that really has to got to be the most stupid thing ever. I know of Ranma's history what he is would never have let that slide by just simply leaving the village

*cackles*
Loved the Omake!
This was a great ficlet! Hope to see more if the plot bunnies bite! :D

First, you violated your own Rule of Ranma Fanfic No2

Second, The ending does not impress me. It lacks emotion, and does not convince me.

Rough story to have to tell, but such an engaging one. It's a nice, open ended set up. I look forward to seeing where you take it.

This was a fascinating take on the basic story type. I liked how complete everything was, and it was a nice touch isolating Rinsa and the kids by the end of the story so that when the revelation happened, the kids were so close to her.

I wanna see where this goes! I wanna see Ranma's little amazons terrorize nerima which has probably calmed down. I wanna see an overprotective Ranma that'll take a firearm to teenage boys hitting on Nodoka. Please Weebee... Oh pretty pleas with sugar on top!

This is really cool, and very interesting.

I found the idea of the story to be very enjoyable. However the story seems unfinished in its current state and I would be disappointed if nothing else came about from this.

I read this, even continued when the whole turn Ranma into an Amazon whore came up. All cause I was hoping the revenge scene would be good... it wasn't. Total and utter disappointment. No sense of resolution. Ranma decides hey forget the fact that you brainwashed and raped me, it's all good. Killing one person doesn't satisfy, especially since it wasn't Cologne. If he didn't want to kill her he could of at least tortured the old b*tch.

I was so hoping for the revenge thins, I would of been happy if Ranma killed those two little brats too. Erase this portion on his life completely by destroying the village and killing those brats. Now that would have been satisfying and it would sort of go along with Bushido, old style Japanese honour. Ranma would just need to commit sepku after and it'd all be good.

Score 2/5. A bit contrived. Not a believable scenario.
While I can understand a careful approach to vengeance due to the two children involved Ranma is smart enough to understand that since his children were the motivation for this extreme act of mental and physical rape they could never be safe in the long run. How long will the lie "they are away training" keep the remaining elders from demanding they return to the village? Also what stops such a corrupt society from doing the same again to other people? Ranma would most likely wait until his mind stabilised and he felt he was prepared and then eliminate all the elders and their holy book of laws. (Possibly by using the spring of drowned bug and locking water.) He might hold back for a while on Cologne if she promised to revise the laws as the last remaining elder. Also, I do not think Ranma even a now slightly different one could keep her mind off the amazons and be her normal relaxed self anytime soon.

I'm very interested in seeing this story continue. It's an angle I certainly haven't seen done before!