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Sargon Dorsai
2009-11-23 . chapter 2
An interesting work we have here. A Ranma with two sets of memories. I wonder how long it will take him to blend them together and get to know his body once again. Ranma not being the master martial artist just doesn't seem right to me.

A very nice encounter with Herb. It's actually how I pictured it happening, though I'm betting that Herb will want to learn more and may end up tracking Ranma down. We'll have to see.

What could be happening with the NWC? Looking forward to seeing what you have planned.
Rune Tobor
2009-11-20 . chapter 2
Too bad Herb did not stay to talk, he would not have liked what the amazons did to Ranma. Akane and her sisters should be married with kids by now, same for the rest of the NWC. Genma and Nodoka(the elder one) might have tried for a second child. Ranma while very good is over a decade out of training. He must know this and I look forward to seeing how he will regain his edge. His katana carrying mother will not know how to act, on one hand she has the grandkids she wants, on the other the way Ranma had them was not manly at all. One thing I am guessing, Ranma will not have the tolerance for bullshit he did when he was a teen. thanks for the update.
Wrin
2009-11-19 . chapter 2
Much as you seem to regret coming back to this story, I'm glad you did. I've wanted to see a few more chapters of it for a while now. Thank you.
wolf40k
2009-11-18 . chapter 2
Love it, can't wait untill the next chapter.
kaztsar
2009-11-18 . chapter 2
I can't believe I completely forgotten about this story. Thank goodness for story alerts.

Its a good story. I'm surprised that they would have let Ranma's children go with him considering how much trouble it took them to get them in the first place.

I'll be looking forward to the next chapter
James Axelrad
2009-11-18 . chapter 2
great stuff.

lots of interesting stuff happening that i hope i get to find out more about soon.
Deacon
2009-11-18 . chapter 2
So from this story I've learned... brainwashing and rape are okay. After being raped and brainwashed a person might think of revenge... only think, but it doesn't really matter, cause it totally fine either way.

Don't know how, from your other excellent fanfics, you've crapped out this. *sigh* sorry for the harshness, but it's true.
Bobboky
2009-11-18 . chapter 2
excellent work
deitarion/SSokolow
2009-11-18 . chapter 2
A little hard to comprehend until I was most of the way through the chapter, but I'm not sure how much of that is writing and how much was my poor memory of the prologue.
borg rabbit
2009-11-18 . chapter 2
Great chapter! Wonder if Akane's married? Seems like EVERY fic (okay, NEARLY every fic) addressing forced absence has her finding someone else, usually in a bad relationship. It would be nice to see one where she waited and had a chance to resume a relationship. She might even be his near equal with him being so out of the picture.
Just a thought.
Riniko22
2009-11-18 . chapter 2
Glad to see a new chapter of your story. Ranma's reaction to what happened was a lot less than I expected. I still expect that there will be further problems from and to the Amazons due to their actions in the past. Herb will find out what happened to Ranma it time and I do not think he would be happy about it. Nor, do I expect he will feel that his debt has been paid after realizing that he really did attack Ranma's children, not a good way to repay a life debt to attack someone and then stop saying that you are now even, it has no honor in it. Looking forward to the next chapter when you are ready. Thanks again for the story.
Mesterio
2009-11-18 . chapter 2
This is an interesting take on what the amazons could have done to Ranma. Hope to see how this works out, and if Ranma is going to get back into shape.

The Tendo's situation and reactions will certainly be something to look forward to.
noodle-monster
2009-11-18 . chapter 1
well, i to be honest i think the prologue is pretty much bullshit. ranma is so far out of character after reawakening as you can get. there'd be no way he'd easily accept nodoka, she'd represent something he is uncomfortable with beyond everything, not too mention he was quite literally raped by mousse to get her. and yes, it would be rape, his mind was altered from it's normal state.
the first killed elder was an accident, i believe he'd truly kill many many more of the tribe after he came out of the neko. and i'm certainly sure he'd kill the old ghoul on sight, no if's no but's, othing else about it. the fact that you have him acting so docile just completely turns me off the story.
Skye Silverwing
2009-11-17 . chapter 2
Got to admit, I did not think this one was ever going to get continued. You certainly are spreading yourself out though, aren't you, weebee? Well, it looks good, and I am looking forward to seeing more of it. When it comes to Ranma stories, you are among the best.
Nysk
2009-11-17 . chapter 2
Glad to see an update

Thanks for writing!
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