Yay!! Oregon!!

I'd say more now but I got to go! Bye! :D

OMG! I TOTALLY GET THAT! Y'Know, even some Oregon's Name wrong, I'm glad someone's taking a stand about it! I even heard a news anchor say the 'willamette valley' wrong! And they even live in the willamette valley! THANK YOU FOR SETTING THIS STRAIGHT! MAYBE SOMEONE WILL GET 'OREGON' RIGHT NOW!
OHH YEAH! Um... Don't take this the wrong way, or anything, cuz I really like your stories, but you may want to check and make sure you're using the right form of a word such as 'than' rather than 'then'.
And don't forget Wisconsin or Michigan and 'Areegan'

That was amazing! Some parts seem like they could use some work, but being an Oregonian myself, you seemed to capture the very escense of Oregon!

D:< the states are PART of Alfred, so him talking to Oregon is like Alfred talking to his shoulder. gtfo.

Aw, this was so cute! I like to read about Alfred having fun with his states/kids. Re: Oregon's characterization, unfortunately I know so little about Oregon that I can't speak to that, but as a person, Beverly seems very fun and interesting, and I think you've got very good "father"/"daughter" interaction going between her and Alfred. Nice job! If you plan to do any more states, I'd look forward to reading them. :)