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Dolor Sit Amet
2009-09-02 . chapter 2
Ah!

The term "realms of possibility" applies perfectly here.

Is this complete? I'd like to see where this could go. But if this is it, I'm fine.

The inner Daniel/Lindsay lover in me is squealing with joy.
Kareena
2009-06-30 . chapter 2
Thanks for the update!I really enjoyed this story!It wasn't rushed-it was perfect!I really love how you portrayed Daniel's character in this story.He is just so cute and adorable!You made me like him much more in this story than on the show.I hope you continue writing,you have great technique!
Lauren
2009-06-24 . chapter 1
I enjoyed reading this. I like the Daniel/Lindsay interaction where she tries to set boundaries but does not want to hurt his feelings. I like that she cares about him but also recognizes his fault. I like that you portrayed him as being both manipulative and also vulnerable, especially in regards to people perceiving him as stupid. I think that is spot on with the show.
I also liked the interaction when the others showed up at the diner. I like that you did not describe Nick's reaction, just Lindsay telling him "Stop giving me that look." Kim and Ken's playful knocking each other seems a little nicer than the interactions they had on the show, but I liked reading it. I think the Daniel/Lindsay scene was more natural than the scene with the larger group, but all of it was written well. I also think that as you write the larger group more it will seem more natural. I also really liked Nick taping a drum solo on the table, he would so do that. Thanks for writing.
Kareena
2009-06-21 . chapter 1
This is really good!I like how the freaks interact with each other.It's consistent to the show.Please write more!
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