This was excellent. I love the little clues that this kind of thing is all just so routine for both Lois and Clark, and how they’re completely unfazed by finding themselves in these impromptu life-and-death situations; “No matter how many times she’d been knocked unconscious...”

“Right. Listen, can we skip the creepy monologue?” Heh!

And, of course; ‘Trouble didn’t find Lois, most days she baked it cookies and knocked on its door.’

Ha! And this was great; ‘Their eyes met across the room and Lois saw a momentary flicker of surprise flash across his features before it was replaced with a quizzical lift of an ebony eyebrow. She offered a small guilty shrug of apology. Despite the tension in the room, she swore she saw him almost smiled in reply.’

Such a lovely little character moment between them, and all done with an exchange of glances. This whole thing had a cinematic feel to it. Great job.

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this was a great story.

yeah this was a great story for a one short.

I've got a theory
Lois is in trouble
Deadly trouble
No, something isn't right there

Ok, so it's not the best rewording of the song... but I love the Buffy reference :) Wonderful fic :)

lol! I didn't expect that last line.

Hee Hee, makes me want to know wehat happens on their Wednesdays.