Wow! Very intense! Very deep! I hope this means that Stella is okay!

Another story that took a couple of read throughs to reveal the layers of story that were going on. I hope, by the way, this all makes sense, it's late at night, and I've drunk caffeine :S I liked the title, though it gave me a feeling that there might be some character damage in there :P However, it was an interesting story and way of writing, and of course it would be rather hypocritical of me to say anything about character damage :P I liked the point of view, you write first person well. And also, I liked the hint of second person in there as Stella (I assume, you gave this away with the name at the beginning) addresses then Mac. The lack of names was interesting as well, it made the piece about sensation and feelings and experiences. An out of body, and an almost out of life experience. It was about sensation and thoughts, and that came over well with the lack of dialogue too, and of course the descriptions. I liked how the story was left, in some parts, untold, so we're left to make guesses as to what has happened. I liked the descriptions of how things change, how vision and feeling becomes different, and how touch sort of hangs in there. That was really eloquently put on my part there :P
I really like this line, for the image it created, 'Against the light that flickers over my head now, not sunlight split by leaves but squares and squares of white rushing down a corridor like a tunnel and you have to let go of me.' Scary though, as it gives some answers, and is worrying as to what's going on. This was another really good line, and I liked the contrast between what has been the spirit and ethereal to the solid and real again, 'It feels so good, that you're holding me, to know that you are here. That I am here. And to feel my body lean against you. I delve into your eyes and let their warm gaze wash over me like sea waves.' I like the imagery of waves and the warmth. And a happy ending! Always good :D

Wow. i honestly don't know what to say, you rendered me speechless, it was that great. my jaw dropped and my wad of gum almost fell on the keyboard, it's a good thing we were born with tongues!

I liked story. You described so alive intese can be experience for dead to come to rise of dead. It gets under your skin, life. It's a habit that's hard to give up. One puff of breath is never enough. You'll find you want to take another."

This is really good!! So full of emotion! I'm glad Stella pulled through.

I guess great minds think a like :) because I have a very simular idea for a story but it is with Stella and Don.

Great Story!

OMG! Thank god she lived. Woo. I also love second person stories! I loved this story. Good job. =]x

wow, really good. you captured all the feelings really well too!

EndyEndyEndyEndyEndy! ^_^

Ohmygah, that was intense!! I loved how you wrote this one, Stella's POV, and so very true to her character. I loved all the very Stella comments, like how cold the metal is under her. She never gives up, that's why Mac loves her!! ^_^
The way she brushes his lips, making him smile-beautiful.
I love it Endy!! ^_^

Love~XOXOX~Stella

of course I liked it! The way you describe the different movements is quite excellent.

very sad, but still sweet