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-0-Whitee-Angeel-0-
2009-08-25 . chapter 2
this is a very cool story!

i hope that you can get to finish it soon.

= D
LadyCalus
2009-08-23 . chapter 1
I really hope you continued this story, its only been 6 weeks since chpt 2 came out, but plz this is an awesome story! Looking, really looking forward to your next chapter!
dbzgtfan2004
2009-07-11 . chapter 1
This is a good story. Please continue. Harry and Hermione forever.
HJP265
2009-07-10 . chapter 2
and now the next chapter...please

I loved it...I really liked it that Lily and Petunia made up and that Lily fell in love with Severus,even if usally I do not really like this ship but here it's so well written that you have to love it (at least I think so)
8thweasleykid
2009-07-09 . chapter 1
I really like the twist with the twins and james favoring the one over the other. i look foward to reading more.
LadyCalus
2009-07-09 . chapter 2
Nice story so far. At first I thought you said that Lily married Vernon and I was like, "OMG, NO!" But thankfully I just misread it. LOL
Coffee Toffee Twisted Froste
2009-07-09 . chapter 2
I love it! It is fantastic1
Readerforlife
2009-07-09 . chapter 2
loved it :]
panther73110
2009-07-09 . chapter 2
Awesome chapter but how old are the children and did Lily tell severus that harry is the true BWL?
DarkArtsMaster17
2009-06-22 . chapter 1
Nice very nice. I love it. I can tell this is going to be a great story. I hope you update soon. I hope lily does take harry away from james.
Readerforlife
2009-06-22 . chapter 1
would love to read more :]
Jarno
2009-06-22 . chapter 1
Have you actually read your chapter? It's completely unbelievable, not an ounce of logic in it. James' reaction is a fallacy.
dougal74
2009-06-22 . chapter 1
A very good start. I look forward to your next chapter.
sweetgirl23
2009-06-21 . chapter 1
I love it. Great chapter. Can't wait for more!
IonicAmalgam
2009-06-21 . chapter 1
Finally, first Twin story I've found where Lily isn't a uncaring mother towards Harry.
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